Converting prehistoric creatures

[Shade]

Quite. The nikt'oo isn't magically making other creatures be able to march for days at a time. It just has a peculiar metabolism that allows it to do that itself.

Anyhow, I'm pretty happy with the ability as-is. Does anyone have any changes they can suggest?

Looking at it again, I think you stripped out anything supernatural about it, so I think it will work.

 

[Cleon]

Looking at it again, I think you stripped out anything supernatural about it, so I think it will work.

In that case, I'll go ahead with adding it to the Working Draft.

 

[freyar]

It looks fine to me, but should we change the name slightly to distinguish it from the Su ability? Indefatigable (Ex), maybe?

 

[Shade]

It looks fine to me, but should we change the name slightly to distinguish it from the Su ability? Indefatigable (Ex), maybe?

That's not a bad idea.

 

[Cleon]

That's not a bad idea.

It's a good idea, but I prefer "Indefatigable March".

 

[freyar]

Fine with me.

 

[Cleon]

Fine with me.

Updating the Working Draft.

 

[Mortis]

Noticed a couple of (very) small issues in the working draft.

Speed has (4 square) rather than (4 squares) and the second paragraph of Indefatigable March still uses the term 'Tireless March'.

That said, and it doesn't actually affect anything important, I prefer 'Relentless March' over 'Indefatigable March'.

Regards
Mortis

 

[Cleon]

Noticed a couple of (very) small issues in the working draft.

Speed has (4 square) rather than (4 squares) and the second paragraph of Indefatigable March still uses the term 'Tireless March'.

That said, and it doesn't actually affect anything important, I prefer 'Relentless March' over 'Indefatigable March'.

Regards
Mortis

Both those are carry-overs from copy & pasting.

Easy enough to fix by updating the Working Draft.

Don't much like "Relentless March". A nikt'oo isn't inexorable or unrelenting when it marches, it just can march a long time without getting tired. I'd be willing to meet halfway with "Unflagging March", I suppose.

How about "Tenacious March" instead? I like that better than Indefatigable March or Unflagging March?

 

[Shade]

How about "Tenacious March" instead? I like that better than Indefatigable March or Unflagging March?

4 out of 5 Jack Black's agree!