Whizbang Dustyboots
Gnometown Hero
It's especially galling given that we are probably in the golden age of good RPG presentation. Just steal layout ideas from the people doing it better, people!More evidence that the biggest issue with most modern adventures is not their structure or their stories or any of that. it is their presentation.
No More Walls Of Text.
And if you don't know who's doing it better, ask and people will be happy to point you to Monte Cook Press, Necrotic Gnome, Tuesday Knight Games and the many other people who've cracked the code.
It's not 1983 when no one has good desktop publishing tools nor any idea of better ways to present this info.