Paul Farquhar
Legend
You are talking about adding a substantial chunk of narrative for each major NPC, much of which won't be used. Not really a starter in a limited page count adventure.at a minimum you can (and should) also write in several scenarios in which the players can earn this
And, unless the author pulls a Dragonlance and expects the players to play a pregenerated character, they have no idea who the PCs are, and what their connection to characters in the story is. They don't know which of the NPCs is a PC's ex-wife, or second cousin once removed. That's the sort of stuff the DM and players need to put into an adventure to make it meaningful.