Remind your player's that newspapers print doom and gloom because it sells, not because that's all there is.
I have not made a third paper yet. Unfortunately for anyone waiting, my group only meets every other week, so we're only about 2/3rds of the way through the second adventure.
As for mistakes, I noticed ones I made that you copied ("‘Dockers of the world unite’ is the
cry often heard upon at the piers" /at/ should be removed).
In my game, I have revealed neither the Family's existence, nor Cippiano's connection to it. Linguistically, your additional article looks good.