D&D 5E Tiamat Unleashed - HELP!?

[dave2008]

I am on the cusp of submitting my 64-page ode to the Chromatic Dragon (Tiamat). And if my adventures with Apostles of Ruin taught my anything, it is that I could always use some editing help. I am just completing my editing pass through the document and it is ready to go - I think.

I am going to my son's university graduation tomorrow and will not be back until next Tuesday. So I hope to post shortly after I get back (6/18 +/-). This is were I am hoping a few intrepid EnWorlders could give it a look over before I post if for everyone to use. So if your available @Matrix Sorcica, @FitzTheRuke, and other's, please let me know and I will DM you a link to the PDF for review. That's it - let me know if there are any takers!

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[FitzTheRuke]

I will absolutely take a pass at it. Thanks for thinking of me. I'll get to it asap.

 

[Shardstone]

I can lend my eyes.

 

[dave2008]

I will absolutely take a pass at it. Thanks for thinking of me. I'll get to it asap.

I still need to finish on last bit. I will send it tomorrow (maybe tonight)

 

[dave2008]

I can lend my eyes.

Thank you! I will send you a link when it is ready.

 

[Matrix Sorcica]

Of course!
And congrats with your son

 

[dave2008]

Thank you everyone for your offers of help. It is greatly appreciated. I have made the draft PDF for review and will sending them to you shortly.

I am not planning on taking any more offers of help, it becomes to much to manage. So please consider this request closed. Thank you!

 

[dave2008]

One last comment for my "editors:"
@FitzTheRuke , @Shardstone , @Matrix Sorcica , @Cruentus , please feel free to comment and make suggestions beyond "proofreading;" however, don't feel compelled to do so. I am open to any ideas, suggestions, and discussion, but please don't feel you are required to give any more than you want or have time for. This should be fun or at least interesting and not work!

Thank you for your time and help!

 

[RoughCoronet0]

I’ve very excited for this, and I know it’s going to be awesome just like all the monsters you have created thus far. Tiamat is one of my favorite gods in D&D history, so any material that revolves around her is going to pique my interest. I know I will use a lot of this material, which is funny as the Tiamat of my games is very different from the standard one.

Maybe in the further we could see you tackle more of her spawn, like the various monstrous Black/Blue/Green/Red/Whitespawn, or the Draconian from Krynn.

 

[dave2008]

I’ve very excited for this, and I know it’s going to be awesome just like all the monsters you have created thus far. Tiamat is one of my favorite gods in D&D history, so any material that revolves around her is going to pique my interest. I know I will use a lot of this material, which is funny as the Tiamat of my games is very different from the standard one.

Maybe in the further we could see you tackle more of her spawn, like the various monstrous Black/Blue/Green/Red/Whitespawn, or the Draconian from Krynn.

I actually ended up cutting several monsters from this supplement, including all the unique kobolds of Azharul and some of the dragonspawn. I do include other dragonspawn however. I didn't do any updates of the classic dragonspawn, but that would be good to add to a new supplement: More Monsters from the Dragonspawn Pits!

PS - My take on Tiamat is a bit different too - you will see soon!