D&D General Returning to the Bit mine dungeon - need feedback

[Shades of Eternity]

Having trouble finishing this so hoping a little crowdsourcing will let me get past my mental block on this.

My world is known as the Hodgepocalypse, it's a pulp post-apoclayptic fantasy world.

I often take the normal in our world and make it wierd.

So the premise is this.

https://www.reuters.com/technology/china-invests-61-bln-computing-data-center-project-official-says-2024-08-29/

this is a bit computing center that because of computer technology and the high magic zone has become a place of danger but also opportunity.

 

[Shades of Eternity]

firstly the surface.

this is a badlands like area on the edge of the badlands (much like lethbridge),

using the five room dungeon model.

1. Room 1: Entrance & Skill Check ChallengeChallenge: Malfunctioning Security Turret (Skill Montage or Combat),
2. Room 2: Puzzle or Roleplay ChallengeChallenge: Terminal 1 - Surface Level Access Terminal,
3. Room 3: Combat or ChallengeEncounter: Code Hounds in the Parking Lot,
4. Room 4: Climax/Big ConflictChallenge: Office Building Ruins - Haunted by Hollow Miner,
5. Room 5: Reward & RevelationEncounter: Hidden Clue in the Control Room Terminal
   

 

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now the depths.

followed by the lower map -

1. Room 1: Entrance & Skill ChallengeChallenge: Compressor Room - Arcane Gas Anomalies (Skill Montage), Room
2. 2: Puzzle or Roleplay ChallengeChallenge: Mining Rig Room - Sentient Mining Rigs, Room
3. 3: Combat ChallengeEncounter: Security Room - Drone Enforcers,
4. Room 4: Climax/Big ConflictRoom 4: Climax/Big ConflictEncounter: Server Chamber - Corrupted AI Avatars,
5. Room 5: Reward & Final BattleEncounter: The Crypto Core – Crypto Core
   
   
   including both map and picture of the big bad (because I'm a silly person)

 

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now the questions
1. placement of encounters on the map (as well as overall adjustments on the map.
2. overall flow and locations that need to be added tweaked.

I am more then happy to post the stats of the various monsters if there is interest for feedback as well.

This is part of my ongoing quest to figure out a descent formula when making dungons.

so any feedback?